tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2929970911954190195.post6804638625264234035..comments2009-08-31T05:10:47.933-07:00Comments on Deadsman Dying: Mo ti di Irunmole (I am Become a god)da_poethttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05264174672740945059noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2929970911954190195.post-87618404778337529912009-08-31T05:10:47.933-07:002009-08-31T05:10:47.933-07:00i like it, but i cnt help feeling it has a lot of ...i like it, but i cnt help feeling it has a lot of potential, like it could have been so much more. i liked the way you started with yoruba, i was expecting to see a bit more of it as you went on, twould have spiced it up. i especially like the last statement, twas powerful!<br />just my opinion tho...Rayohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10724898765410497224noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2929970911954190195.post-6907015661941083692009-02-06T10:03:00.000-08:002009-02-06T10:03:00.000-08:00The rhythm, like the statement, is full of power t...The rhythm, like the statement, is full of power throughout! A great poem, Ade.<BR/><BR/>KarenPeacefulWmn9https://www.blogger.com/profile/05039348760006350759noreply@blogger.com